Wednesday, 25 June 2014

Grass hopper tennis

WALT: improve our small ball skills like catching, throwing, and hitting.

Description: We have been participating in a tennis programme with Big John (John Salisbury) from Tennis Manawatu. He has taught us some tennis skills that help with controlling and hitting the ball 

Eveluation: I think next time slow down on the race tracks cause it kept falling off

Buddy comment : I think you have done good with your description . From zac N

What challenged you the most and Why?race tracks because It was going to fast .

Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?to cut the cheese not my finger!

What are you most proud of and why? I'm  proud of my self becasue I won a game.

Wednesday, 18 June 2014

Integrity sample

WALT: communicate a message with others.
WALT: show integrity.

DESCRIPTION: We have been learning about integrity.  We want to share our understanding with others.

What? Make a Puppet Pal to show our understanding of integrity.
Why? To show what we know about integrity, to share during our Student Led Conference.
When? Term 2, Week 1 - 7
Who? The World

EVALUATION: I think we could next time make it a bit more funner because it got a bit board ! 

Buddy feed back:i think that you did a great job but what is the stuff in the background?(jeffery) they are jet planes just too make it a bit more interesting (.Eli ) 

Monday, 16 June 2014

writing sample

WALT: inform

DESCRIPTION: Write an explanation about something you have learned about energy.

This is my first draft 

This is my second draft

Everything in the world is made out of atoms. What does the three states of matter mean? Ice is a solid and when you hold it it turns into a liquid because the energy flows inside and atoms separate. Liquids are oil and water and stuff like that. Gas is like steam air/atoms. Gas is basically air because you can't see it and you breath it.

Evaluation next time I'm going to listen to Cam'Ryn

Buddy feedback: you need to put the WALT at the top and the discription is too short. You need to make it longer Cam'Ryn

Ebony's feedback: I think you did a good job explaining the difference between all the states of matter. I like how you ask questions in your writing. It helps he reader to connect with what you are telling them.

Next time you could aim to add more detail to your writing. You might do this with complex sentences. Also I think you could work on a detailed diagram. This one seams a bit basic and I think you could do better.

Wednesday, 11 June 2014

Science sample  
WALT: show our understanding of how energy works.

DESCRIPTION: We have been learning about energy. To share our learning, we have made a video to explain how energy works.

Buddy feed back : next time try to make it a bit more intreasting (Anna)

Evaluation :I think I should make it more intreasting . (ELI) 

Monday, 9 June 2014


Feedback: I think you have done a great job at following the guidelines for this post. You image is really eye catching.

Now you have a good trick to help you learn your spelling words. 

Tuesday, 3 June 2014

Literacy sample

 We are learning to find other ways to solve problems like 5+5+5+5

Walt : try to teach people how to solve times tables easier

Description :how to solve 5 time tables like skip count five times 2 so double 5 is ten thats the

Reflection: I think could be more descriptive like in the video i didn't tell much stuff

buddy reflection eli you did really well at your timetable i thick that you did a awesome job and eli good job i like it.